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The Breast Expansion Story Club Updates
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In this inaugural issue, Felicity has come to New York on assignment. As a member of the Bureau for Supernatural Tactics and Intelligence Gathering (BurSTInG), she is looking for a challenge. The normal thugs are little match for her strength and skills; however, when a cat burglar known as the Blooming Fool arrives in her city, she’s off to confront him. BurSTInG’s intelligence on the thief is scarce, leaving Felicity unaware of the trick he has in store for her and her one time ally, the bounty huntress called Tempo. Will they be able to stop her newest foe or will he leaving her begging for mercy? Check out our first issue and check out the action. http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...iew_1400px.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW A new chapter in BE based comics, this story is the introduction of the world’s newest superheroine, Felicity: a snarky, uncompromising hunter who thinks all criminals are little more than prey. While she is super-humanly strong and exceedingly combat proficient, the new villains she will soon face will put both her mind and will to the test. Will they be able to break her or will she land on her feet, victorious, and stop their plans? Back from his hiatus, long time comic author Fahzbehn leads us on a tale that is darker and closer to modern action comics than we’ve previously seen. Issue one sends us on an exciting romp into a new world of superheroines and villains, introducing the titular character, Felicity, along with the Bounty Huntress known as Tempo. The Blooming Fool is out to steal a jewel but will Felicity be able to stop him. Find out in this inaugural issue. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Boobpire Resurrection
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The two starving boobpires find the location of their prey. It is only a matter of seconds until the two busty demons strike… http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...on_Preview.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW Boobpire returns after a long hiatus. The Boobpire story was originally going to be a one-shot story, but reader demand has turned Boobpire into a full fledged series. Boobpire Resurrection offers plenty of supernatural breast expansion and sexual situations that are sure to be enjoyed! FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Special Cargo (Illustrated Story)
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Mary had worked as an aide for the united planets earth ambassador to mars for three years. She had been hired to his staff after finishing government school at 18, firstly working as a general secretary, Mary had quickly proved her value at her job and was then elevated to working as a direct aide to the ambassador. Now, after only two years on the job, she had been given a very special, high priority assignment. Two years ago mars had suffered from a terrible plague. The entire population had suffered its devastating effects, thousands upon thousands dying under its horrific touch. By the end of the year long plague, fully three quarters of the population had died, leaving a once prosperous planet with a population of 250 million, reduced to a suffering world of barely 20 million. The martians had appealed to earth for aid and, in a meeting full of secret negotiations, earth had agreed to aid mars in any way that it could. http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...go_Preview.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW In this opportunity Bob King BEArchive’s FREE story (http://bit.ly/21X58Uo) was illustrated by Dead Robot to bring it to The BE Story Club readers! More BEArchive’s stories are coming soon! FREE preview of the story here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
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Seems like it could have used a little editing and a once-over look at the formatting of the finished file. For one, it looks really hard to read if proper nouns such as "Earth" and "Mars" aren't properly capitalized throughout. (The version of the story on The Overflowing Bra looks fine on that score -- maybe it was edited by someone else at some point?)
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@catfish27 thanks for the heads up! We will fix the issues and reupload the file. Thanks again :)
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The Three Wish Myth: Eating Out
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It’s been a long, fun day for Brad and Laura and they are famished! What is the cure? No, not the genie. The culinary wizardry of the Szechuan place down the road from their apartment, of course! It is also a nice place to sit, eat, and figure out how to cope with their radically changed lives. And what better for desert than the waitress? http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...IV_Preview.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW The Three Wish War has been a labour of love for Bill Pratt and it shows. The story asks the question of why do genies do what they do and why stop at three wishes? The central genie sees himself as something of a public servant, assisting mortals to attain greatness and generally improve the lot of humankind. But only three wishes would limit his goals. Wishes would be hoarded, greed would rule, and where is the fun in that? How can anyone learn without the opportunity to make and make good on a few mistakes? The genie genuinely enjoys his work, so why would anyone stop him at three wishes? Brad is a great test case for the genie’s philosophy. A good natured soul, and possibly a bit of an idiot, he has a lot of potential for learning, and he’s young so he has a lot of time in which to do it. Unfortunately, even with generally good intentions, he can cause a lot of chaos in the lives of innocent bystanders such as his less laid-back girlfriend, Laura. What can Brad learn from all of this? More importantly, what can the genie? FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
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Yay Issue 4 :D
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Educational Endowments III
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In a Breakfast Club type situation, six students who barely graduated high school have to take a special class to determine their placement in college or if they have to repeat senior year of high school. Separated into three male/female partnerships, they have to work together to reach the best grade. As extra incentive, their teacher Miss Hooters added a special side effect where breast growth or shrinkage results from their exam scores! Can the students put aside their differences to pass? Or will they get MUCH MORE than they anticipated with this class? Note: This story features graphic sex and BE from the tiny to GIGANTIC proportions! http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...II_Preview.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW Being the fifth breast expansion series from acclaimed adult comic writer TJ Hunter, Educational Endowments is a fun and lighthearted story of six students crippled in some way by their high school experiences, forced to move past their previous personas to become well rounded college students. If you like your stories well written and filled to the brim with humour, fun characters, various varieties of sex, and breast enlargements that go from tiny/normal to EPIC/GIGANTIC proportions, buy a copy of Educational Endowments today! FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
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Erin is obsessed with Steve. Besides being obsessed, the other issue is that she is unhappy with her weight. Erin soon finds the ultimate answer to weight loss in the form on a diet pill. Erin will soon find out that the pill causes calories to her breasts… http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...ll_Preview.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW A quick one shot based on the trope that some woman seem to gain weight in their breasts, rather than their body. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
The Wig I
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Donna is unattractive and unhappy with her life. Donna is jealous of Grace, a celebrity, for her huge breasts and slim figure that would make any man drool. By chance, Donna discovers that the wig is what gives Grace her figure. http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...view-copia.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW A reader request story based on a fan’s idea. The Wig has plenty of breast expansion action and body change within the short story. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Master PC: Greek Drama II
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The geek-girl duo of Monica and Penny are unlikely guests at a Delta Delta Delta sorority house party unaware that the party is a front for a trap. A trap for them! A trap that the victims can’t help but enjoy. They have no choice. You see, the nerds of the Mu Mu fraternity have unleashed JR Parz’s classic Master PC Program on the sorority house. The impossible will become possible. Breasts will grow. The most mild mannered and demure ladies will become raving, uncontrollable nymphomaniacs. Nerds will get laid. Can Penny and Monica escape or will their future contain huge breasts and little brains? http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...foromaster.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW William Pratt brings you his disturbed view of JR Parz’s classic Master PC Universe. That means no cyber ninjas, no sparkling vampires, and no-one comes out with less than a D-cup. OK. That’s not entirely true. No boobs on the guys. Sorry. Maybe next time. Mr. Pratt, Bill to his friends, has been at this for a while and it shows. He starts fast. The story gets its first busty nymphomaniac on page three and, after a brief interlude to introduce Bill’s new friends Penny and Monica, the next stop is some action and adventure as the girls travel into the belly of the beast: a party at the Delta Delta Delta sorority house. Triple Dee is home of the lowest grades and hottest bodies on campus, and a trap set by the nefarious head of the Mu Mu Fraternity. A trap that, once caught, the victims can’t help but enjoy. They literally have no other option. The nerds of Mu Mu have Master PC. They control the bimbo sorority. And for some reason they want Penny and Monica. Can the girls escape with their intellect intact or will they spend the rest of their lives as Triple-Dee bimbo-sluts? And who is this Willard that has Mu Mu so worried? FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Boobpire Resurrection II
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The poor souls drained of blood from a boobpire have an unexpected side effect. How will the audience at the fashion show deal with such strange zombies? http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...obpireMail.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW Boobpire returns after a long hiatus. The Boobpire story was originally going to be a one-shot story, but reader demand as turned Boobpire into a full fledged series. Boobpire Resurrection offers plenty of supernatural breast expansion and sexual situations that are sure to be enjoyed! FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Felicity II
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Felicity is recovering from her loss against the Fool when an alert goes out from Tempo that the Fool has been spotted. When Felicity goes to stop the Fool, both she and Tempo are forced to make a choice: one of them or the crowd. It’s a growing problem and one that Felicity must solve. She’s felt the Fool’s power before. Will she have the strength to fight against it? http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...ity-2_Mail.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW The second issue of Fahzbehn’s brand new series: Felicity. In this story, Felicity runs off to save Tempo from the Fool, only to find them both put in a risky position. The Fool uses Tempo’s weakness against her and forces them to make the choice: one of them or the whole crowd? When the choice is made, Felicity has to live with the decision and figure out how to make things right. This story is part of on ongoing arc that will be expanding out to include characters new and old. What will happen to Felicity and Tempo? Read and find out! FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Educational Endowments IV
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In a Breakfast Club type situation, six students who barely graduated high school have to take a special class to determine their placement in college or if they have to repeat senior year of high school. Separated into three male/female partnerships, they have to work together to reach the best grade. As extra incentive, their teacher Miss Hooters added a special side effect where breast growth or shrinkage results from their exam scores! Can the students put aside their differences to pass? Or will they get MUCH MORE than they anticipated with this class? Note: This story features graphic sex and BE from the tiny to GIGANTIC proportions! http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...ts-IV_Mail.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW Being the fifth breast expansion series from acclaimed adult comic writer TJ Hunter, Educational Endowments is a fun and lighthearted story of six students crippled in some way by their high school experiences, forced to move past their previous personas to become well rounded college students. If you like your stories well written and filled to the brim with humour, fun characters, various varieties of sex, and breast enlargements that go from tiny/normal to EPIC/GIGANTIC proportions, buy a copy of Educational Endowments today! FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
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Vera had a crush on a co-worker, but on the night before deciding to ask him out, her breasts began to grow full cup sizes at random moments! From busting out of her blouse at an outdoor restaurant, Vera ends up in random embarrassing moments and explicit sex as she looks for love during her MASSIVE journey from B-cup to Taboo proportions! For everyone who likes EXTREME BREAST EXPANSION and HUMOROUS SEXUAL SITUATIONS, this story is for you! http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...e-III_Mail.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW In the eighth breast expansion series from lauded adult comic writer TJ Hunter, “Massive” is a semi-realistic take on what might actually happen to a woman who experiences breast expansion and the extreme situations and decisions that might need to be made for her to survive the experience. For those who like well written stories with well rounded characters, dramatic situations, sexual situations, and slow BE over a length of time, then this is a story you need to read ASAP! FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
The Three Wish Myth V
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Brad is getting this whole genie wishes thing figured out. Laura is finally comfortable in her new life as a bisexual nymphomaniac porn star. Jen is coming to like the idea as well. But things have changed during the millennia the the genie was in his lamp. There is a new attitude toward granting wishes and new rules handling them. Rules the genie has been flagrantly breaking. And the other genies want him DEAD! http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...yth-V_Mail.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW The Three Wish War has been a labour of love for Bill Pratt and it shows. The story asks the question of why do genies do what they do and why stop at three wishes? The central genie sees himself as something of a public servant, assisting mortals to attain greatness and generally improve the lot of humankind. But only three wishes would limit his goals. Wishes would be hoarded, greed would rule, and where is the fun in that? How can anyone learn without the opportunity to make and make good on a few mistakes? The genie genuinely enjoys his work, so why would anyone stop him at three wishes? Brad is a great test case for the genie’s philosophy. A good natured soul, and possibly a bit of an idiot, he has a lot of potential for learning, and he’s young so he has a lot of time in which to do it. Unfortunately, even with generally good intentions, he can cause a lot of chaos in the lives of innocent bystanders such as his less laid-back girlfriend, Laura. What can Brad learn from all of this? More importantly, what can the genie? FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Educational Endowments V
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In a Breakfast Club type situation, six students who barely graduated high school have to take a special class to determine their placement in college or if they have to repeat senior year of high school. Separated into three male/female partnerships, they have to work together to reach the best grade. As extra incentive, their teacher Miss Hooters added a special side effect where breast growth or shrinkage results from their exam scores! Can the students put aside their differences to pass? Or will they get MUCH MORE than they anticipated with this class? Note: This story features graphic sex and BE from the tiny to GIGANTIC proportions! http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...Newsletter.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW Being the fifth breast expansion series from acclaimed adult comic writer TJ Hunter, Educational Endowments is a fun and lighthearted story of six students crippled in some way by their high school experiences, forced to move past their previous personas to become well rounded college students. If you like your stories well written and filled to the brim with humour, fun characters, various varieties of sex, and breast enlargements that go from tiny/normal to EPIC/GIGANTIC proportions, buy a copy of Educational Endowments today! FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
The Collider: The BE Particle I
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The story continues where “Collider” left off. Sam and May chase after the particle that transforms any woman who possesses it into a power mad sex goddess. Sam and May soon learn that the particles effects isn’t just limited to a small pocket of reality but all of it. http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...54352/news.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW Bo Saget continues the Collider story with Collider: The BE Particle. THe story has plenty of breast growth nad sex that the author is known for. Additionally, the story features some amazon sized women and penis growth for good measure. Readers are sure to enjoy the reality bending ride Collider: The BE Particle offers. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Zereva
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Zereva is imprisoned in a ship cruising in the deepest parts of space. However all is not lost. Using her breast hypnotizing powers she is able to convince her captor to unlock her cuffs. Zereva then further takes advantage of the dazed guard by having sex with him to assimilate information about the ship’s layout. From this, Zereva figures out where the escape pod bay is. On they way there Zereva uses her breasts to detect patrols. Zereva ambushes and defeats them with her super strength. Making haste, she then ruses to the bay before their bodies can be found. Once at the bay, all seems well until the alarm goes and the controls to the escape pod close up. http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...News-Image.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW Zereva is a new original character for the breast expansion club. The heroine is inspired by the hero aliens that come to Earth and use their otherworldly powers to save the day. With Zereva, her powers involve her huge breasts and sex. Her breasts can be used to hypnotize, sense, and even attack! Readers are sure to enjoy the thrilling tale of Zereva. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Master PC: Greek Drama III
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Join William Pratt and his friends Monica and Penny in the third part of their adventure in the Delta Delta Delta sorority house. When we last saw our heroines it looked like the situation was one down and one to go. Penny has succumbed to Steve’s trap and looks well on her way to becoming a horny bimbo-slut. Can Monica be far behind? Can she resist being caught up in the orgy breaking out all around her? The other nerds are all having fun, but will she? http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...Image-News.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW Party on, dudes! William Pratt’s Greek Drama continues as the party at the Delta Delta Delta sorority really gets moving. Of course whether or not this is a good thing depends on your point of view. Penny is enjoying herself as she slips into her new life as a horny sex-toy, but Monica… Monica is a little freaked out. But that is just motivation for a mind like hers, so we finally get some inklings of what is really going on. And how the mysterious Willard fits in. The battle begins with a game of StarCraft… FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
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Vera had a crush on a co-worker, but on the night before deciding to ask him out, her breasts began to grow full cup sizes at random moments! From busting out of her blouse at an outdoor restaurant, Vera ends up in random embarrassing moments and explicit sex as she looks for love during her MASSIVE journey from B-cup to Taboo proportions! For everyone who likes EXTREME BREAST EXPANSION and HUMOROUS SEXUAL SITUATIONS, this story is for you! http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...Image-News.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW In the eighth breast expansion series from lauded adult comic writer TJ Hunter, “Massive” is a semi-realistic take on what might actually happen to a woman who experiences breast expansion and the extreme situations and decisions that might need to be made for her to survive the experience. For those who like well written stories with well rounded characters, dramatic situations, sexual situations, and slow BE over a length of time, then this is a story you need to read ASAP! FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Boobpire Resurrection III
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An unnatural quietness fills the fashion show as onlookers watch in a shocked silence, broken only by the moans from the zombie model. The well endowed zombie model continues to stroke and suck on the fashion show host’s hard penis to get him nice and hard for the coming sex. Suddenly the audience hears more moans, but it’s not the zombie model whose making noise. The noise is coming from behind the stage, where the dressing room is located. Suddenly a mass of newly made zombie models burst out from the dressing room and tumble on to the stage. Before the audience can even react, they find themselves swarmed by a sea of dangerously lustful zombies. Normal zombies only want brains, brains, and more brains, but boobpire zombies are not normal zombies. All boobpire zombies want is sex, sex, and more sex. How well the audience survive this night of the undead zombie sluts? How will April react, or take advantage, of the chaos orgy she has created? http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...Image-News.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW Boobpire returns after a long hiatus. The Boobpire story was originally going to be a one-shot story, but reader demand turned Boobpire into a full fledged series. The story also includes sexual situations based vampire erotica. Vampires in popular culture are seen as sexy monsters, as opposed to something like Frankenstein’s monster. Bo Saget thought that breast expansion will be a perfect twist to throw into the vampire formula we have all come to know. Boobpires have similar qualities to vampires, but the have some differences besides the giant breasts. Boobpire’s strengths and weaknesses will be explored further a the story progresses amongst the erotic vampire chaos. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Collider: The BE Particle II
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Sam and May continue to chase after the BE particle. The unstable particle is easy to follow as it leaves a trail of breast expansion and sex wherever it goes. Despite the fate of reality as we know it on the brink, Sam and May reignite their childish battle about who gets the particle. Sam shoves May aside. Luckily May’s fall is cushioned by a woman’s giant breasts. This low blow move gives Sam the edge in the race to get the particle. May soon catches up and is gaining on Sam. All seems lost when Sam notices a woman’s breasts starting to grow affront of her. Thinking quickly, Sam throws the woman on top of May. May is soon overwhelmed and pinned by the woman;s growing boobs, thus securing Sam’s victory. Sam grabs the particle, the energy overwhelming, but she must control it! Sam will fix everything and make reality normal again! Or will she? http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...News-Image.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW After a long hiatus, Bo Saget picks up the old author’s reigns and continues the Collider story with Collider: The BE Particle. The events of Collider created a god particle using the large hadron collider. That god particle has the power to warp reality in what ever image the owner of the particle wishes. Unfortunately (or fortunately), the reality is more often than not a fulled fever dream full of giant breasts and sex. Collider: The BE Particle has plenty of breast growth and sex that Bo Saget is known for. Additionally, the story features some amazon and giantess sized women and penis growth for good measure. Readers are sure to enjoy the reality bending ride Collider: The BE Particle offers. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Spongeboobs
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Ronald Dannon convinces the Board of Directors of TriCore and its Chairman, Mr. Tristan, how amazing his partner’s creation, Aqua Youth, is and how it works. However, they need a human test subject to fully confirm its results. Assistant Manager of the company’s beauty department TriBeauty, Julia Millers, was chosen to become their test subject for the product. Julia is against it especially after the long work and dedication she gave to the company and still coping from the divorce thanks to her cheating ex-husband who slept with a younger woman. But with some words from the Chairman and promise of compensation for cooperating with benefits and large sum of money, Julia agreed to do the testing. Julia hopes this might turn around her life after everything she has been through. http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...ews-Image1.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW It has been a long time since I wrote anything new after “Changing and Growing in Las Vegas” but I managed to come up this new story as my next comic. With my past stories having original characters who able to grow at will, I wanted a story where the main character is being forced in having her body to grow but somehow managing it. That is when expansion through water absorption comes into mind, especially since its been done before through the works by the artists I normally follow. This was definitely a new take for me in writing how the expansion works. I was nervous at first but it worked out well for me and learned so much from it. With that and adding age regression, that helped me to come up Julia, a hard working woman in her 40’s who need something light her up after going through a divorce. We get to see Julia regress her age step by step in one or two pages thanks to the Aqua Youth product but soon things turn bad after overusing it causing that water absorbency in her body go crazy as her boobs and butt fill and expand with each ounce of water she gets in contact. With the supporting characters from Julia’s friend, Sofia, to her possible love interest, Ronald, we get to see Julia as a character that readers would like and compare. Honestly, this has been one of the best stories I have written and hope the readers will enjoy it. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
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Er, is the "publisher's review" supposed to be written from first-person view of the author? ^^;
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I've never really grasped what use they are in general. Hate writing them. Try coming up with something worth saying when you get to chapter 6 that isn't a rehash of 1 through 5.
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What I don't understand is why they persist in calling it a Publishers Review when they make the author write both it and the teaser. Presumably it's to give the impression that they actually have an opinion on the material that appears on their sites, but having written for them AND been a member for a while, I don't think I really believe that's true.
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My experiences with the Expansion Fan site were mostly positive. they have a much more controlled roll out and editing process. The downside is a need to get expanded boobies on the page early, killing anticipation and making the comics feel rushed. A waste because with 15 pages an issue you can tell more complex stories than you can in the BESC's 10.
When you see the roughs of the artwork, you have time to adjust things that didn't translate from writer's brain to artist brain. When I see the finished pencils, I really get to see what stayed in my head and didn't make it to the paper, or didn't get emphasized well enough. That's generally when I give the dialogue a once-over to suit the artist's vision, insert a caption or two, and maybe re-attribute dialogue to a different character because they're on a better side of the panel or have more real estate around them for the speech bubble. I'm colourblind so my input into the colouring checks aren't that useful, but I have had comics (though not at BESC or Fan) where characters were drawn too similarly and the colourist kept on mixing their hair colours, probably as confused as the rest of us, and confusing things worse. Even I could have caught that. |
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I've neglected a few things. I've LIKED how he vast majority of the BESC and Bimbo SC stuff turned out. The real high point is Three Wish War. Celestin's work was brilliant.
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Bigger Tip
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Sam is in desperate need of a job. Luckily she was able to find work at a local sexy gimmick restaurant called Knockers with very busty ladies. Although not ideal, Sam decides to persevere through anyway. One of the girls tries to help Sam to help her so she doesn’t feel like an outsider but she gets a little bit carried away… The first day at her new job will change he life and breasts forever. http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...r-Tip_News.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW Another one shot that is a sexy breast expansion parody of sex appeal chain restaurants like Hooters. The story has plenty of breast expansion and sex acts despite its short length. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Zereva II
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Without a moment to spare Zereva escapes the prison ship. The unguided escape pod soon crashes a strange planet called Earth. Dazed and confused, Zereva emerges from her vessel. Suddenly, Zereva is greeted by the local heroes who came to investigate the crash. Seeing them as a threat, Zereva prepares to fight. After defeating the heroes with ease, Zereva mounts the lone male hero to learn about Earth… http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...News-Image.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW Zereva is a new original character for the breast expansion club. The heroine is inspired by the hero aliens that come to Earth and use their otherworldly powers to save the day. With Zereva, her powers involve her huge breasts and sex. Her breasts can be used to hypnotize, sense, and even attack! Readers are sure to enjoy the thrilling tale of Zereva. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Three Wishes for Three Women #2
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Once found, lost artifacts of great power rarely stand still. They are lost, fought-over, and stolen. Bodies lay strewn in their wake. And few artifacts are greater than the genie’s lamp. Karen had the lamp. Now Melanie does, and Melanie is not nice. Melanie also learns why discovers why the genie is so opposed to the three wish limit. And things go downhill from there. roommate, Melanie, has no such concerns and quickly Meanwhile, the grand vizier, Dr. Bey, takes matters into his own hands, travelling to the human world for the first time in thousands of years and finds it has changed greatly in his absence. He needs and makes allies of his own. http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...News-Image.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW The Three Wish War has been a labour of love for Bill Pratt and it shows. The story asks the question of why do genies do what they do and why stop at three wishes? And how far are they willing to go to maintain the status quo? This time around, the genie is bound by the new rules, and he hates them. Worse, his attention is divided by a rebellion turned bloody back in his homeland. He can’t do his job with a paltry three wishes, but a bloodbath to win back the right to perform his job as he sees fit is not what he had in mind. His clients this time around are three roommates: the quiet one, Karen, wants to be an actress. The pretty one, Melanie, enjoys a life of easy leisure, but always wants more. And Natalie just wishes her two friends could get along. Literally. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
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Looks like it's turning out well. Hopefully people will forgive the slow pace of the first issue. Needed some space to establish the "before" state before going gonzo.
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"Melanie also learns why discovers why"
"And things go downhill from there. roommate, Melanie, has no such concerns and quickly Meanwhile," So is it that you don't care, or just think we don't? Because this kind of stuff on an official advertisement is embarrassing, man. ^^; |
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Looks like a bit of Chapter 1's SIF got in there somehow. It's in the SIF I submitted, but not in the Word doc I pasted into the SIF.
Weird. Script reads: Clad in modern desert warfare gear, complete with padded helmet. That one is on Celestin. |
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I'm going through the rest of the SIFs to see if there are any other nasty surprises.
Also just did a re-write of the last two chapters of Three Wishes for Three Women to take advantage of Celestin's art style and where Celestin went with the visuals on some of the characters. Anyone up for a test read? |
Educational Endowments #6
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In a Breakfast Club type situation, six students who barely graduated high school have to take a special class to determine their placement in college or if they have to repeat senior year of high school. Separated into three male/female partnerships, they have to work together to reach the best grade. As extra incentive, their teacher Miss Hooters added a special side effect to where breast growth or shrinkage results from their exam scores! Can the students put aside their differences to pass? Or will they get MUCH MORE than they anticipated with this class? Note: This story features graphic sex and BE from the minor to GIGANTIC proportions! http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...News-Image.jpg OFFICIAL PUBLISHER'S REVIEW Being the fifth breast expansion series from acclaimed adult comic writer TJ Hunter, Educational Endowments is a fun and lighthearted story of six students crippled in some way by their high school experiences and are forced to move past their previous personas to become well rounded college students. If you like your stories well written and filled to the brim with humour, fun characters, various varieties of sex, and breast enlargements that go from minor/normal to EPIC/GIGANTIC proportions, buy a copy of Educational Endowments today! FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Felicity #3
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In this issue, Felicity’s been given control over her own growth in order to better adjust if The Fool encounters her again. When she goes to stop a bank robbery, she is unable to stop the fool from escaping when a new, growing problem arises: the giantess Golgara. Will Felicity be able to take down her newest foe or will Golgara put Felicity down for the count, once and for all? Check out the newest issue of Felicity and find out! http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...Image-News.jpg The third issue of Fahzbehn’s ongoing series: Felicity. In this story, Felicity tries to adjust to her new abilities when she encounters the Fool along with a brand new foe: the growing giantess known simply as Golgara. As part of an ongoing series of action based comics, this issue presents an all new challenge for Felicity. Can sheer force and combat prowess win the day or will Felicity find another way to beat the growing Golgara. Will she be able to find Tempo and save her best friend from The Fool’s clutches? What new tricks does The Fool have up his sleeve? Read and find out! FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Boobpire Resurrection #4
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April revels in the chaotic orgy she had created. Turned on by the masses before her, April grabs Olivia to satisfy her lustful urges. Little does April know that a model has survived the onslaught. Hiding amongst the zombie orgy, the model quietly dials the police. How much help could the police be against a dangerously horny zombie horde? The answer is not much. Law enforcement is not equipped to handle the supernatural. The sex crazed zombies quickly overwhelm the officers. April satisfied with the scene before her, decides to return to her liar to continue having sex with Olivia without interruption. A lone female officer remains as she vainly fends off the sex zombies. Her gun soon runs out of ammo and she is left to the mercy of the undead horde. The policewoman curls up into a ball and closes her eyes as she anticipates her end, when suddenly zombie screams fill her ears… http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...News-image.jpg Boobpire returns after a long hiatus. The Boobpire story was originally going to be a one-shot story, but reader demand turned Boobpire into a full fledged series. The story also includes sexual situations based vampire erotica. Vampires in popular culture are seen as sexy monsters, as opposed to something like Frankenstein’s monster. Bo Saget thought that breast expansion will be a perfect twist to throw into the vampire formula we have all come to know. Boobpires have similar qualities to vampires, but the have some differences besides the giant breasts. Boobpire’s strengths and weaknesses will be explored further a the story progresses amongst the erotic vampire chaos. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days - COUPON POLL2017 [registration required] |
Three Wishes for Three Women #3
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Now that Melanie is a belly-dancing sex-slave, Karen is even less interested in using the lamp. But the magic of genie wishes is the only way to save her roommate. Does it occur to her that she might be better off with the new, docile Melanie and she should just quit while she’s ahead? No, but she does know she’s in OVER her head and goes for help. Meanwhile, Bey’s new allies teach the grand vizier how to fit in in the modern world. And then Natalie comes home to a genie make-over. http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...News-Image.jpg The Three Wish War has been a labour of love for Bill Pratt and it shows. The story asks the question of why do genies do what they do and why stop at three wishes? And how far are they willing to go to maintain the status quo? This time around, the genie is bound by the new rules, and he hates them. Worse, his attention is divided by a rebellion turned bloody back in his homeland. He can’t do his job with a paltry three wishes, but a bloodbath to win back the right to perform his job as he sees fit is not what he had in mind. His clients this time around are three roommates: the quiet one, Karen, wants to be an actress. The pretty one, Melanie, enjoys a life of easy leisure, but always wants more. And Natalie just wishes her two friends could get along. Literally. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days - COUPON POLL2017 [registration required] |
Massive #5
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Vera had a crush on a co-worker, but on the night before deciding to ask him out, her breasts began to grow full cup sizes at random moments! From busting out of her blouse at an outdoor restaurant, Vera ends up in random embarrassing moments and explicit sex as she looks for love during her MASSIVE journey from B-cup to Taboo proportions! For everyone who likes EXTREME BREAST EXPANSION and HUMOROUS SEXUAL SITUATIONS, this story is for you! http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...News-Image.jpg In the eighth breast expansion series from lauded adult comic writer TJ Hunter, “Massive” is a semi-realistic take on what might actually happen to a woman who experiences breast expansion and the extreme situations and decisions that might need to be made for her to survive the experience. For those who like well written stories with well rounded characters, dramatic situations, sexual situations, and slow BE over a length of time, then this is a story you need to read ASAP! FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
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William Pratt brings you the exciting continuation of Master PC: Greek Drama. Steve has Penny, but Monica has made her escape from Delta Delta Delta with Willard, the Mu Mu brother who probably started this whole mess with Master PC. Does that mean she’s safe and on her way to discovering what is really going on, or will Willard be helping Monica practice her Pogo stick impersonation in the pages ahead? Read on and find out! http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...News-Image.jpg William Pratt serves up an extra dose of chaos as Monica discovers that the Mu Mu fraternity has programmed Master PC with dozens of keywords for transforming any woman who hears them in a variety of different ways, tuning the unsuspecting women to meet the nerd’s most perverted desires. And since they are nerds they have some pretty generic, but fun, desires. Most of them fixated on breasts. Questions are answered, and a few new ones are asked, but before Monica can get busy saving Penny and sorting things out, she needs to understand what’s going on. Fortunately Willard is all too happy to lend a hand with her crash course in Master PC 101. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Collider The BE Particle #3
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May suddenly awakes. It feels like she woke up from a dream. May soon finds out that she is standing on stage in a massive auditorium affront of thousands of people. May then notices Sam is next to her. Sam is receiving a Nobel prize for physics due to her work on the large hadron collider. Apparently she discovered the god particle. May finally figures out what is going on. She calls Sam out on the reality that obviously suits her needs. Sam quips at Sam that her reality is way better than May’s. There are no goddess orgies and everything is very normal, albeit some minor Sam edits. After the award ceremony, Sam celebrates the fact that she saved the universe. However, a certain temptation soon falls upon her. What was it like to be a sex goddess? Sam has to experience what May had. Even if it’s just for a second. Just for a little bit… http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...News-Image.jpg After a long hiatus, Bo Saget picks up the old author’s reigns and continues the Collider story with Collider: The BE Particle. The events of Collider created a god particle using the large hadron collider. That god particle has the power to warp reality in what ever image the owner of the particle wishes. Unfortunately (or fortunately), the reality is more often than not a fulled fever dream full of giant breasts and sex. Collider: The BE Particle has plenty of breast growth and sex that Bo Saget is known for. Additionally, the story features some amazon and giantess sized women and penis growth for good measure. Readers are sure to enjoy the reality bending ride Collider: The BE Particle offers. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Three Wishes for Three Women #4
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Once found, lost artifacts of great power rarely stand still. They are lost, fought-over, and stolen. Bodies lay strewn in their wake. And few artifacts are greater than the genie’s lamp. Karen and her friends got the lamp the honest way and the bodies are piling up in an unusual place: the land of the genies as war breaks out between those in favour of the three wish rule and those opposed. Natalie has wished herself into a state of perpetual sexual ecstasy, but that’s not as fun as it sounds. Karen has been to see a lawyer to word the perfect wish to rescue Melanie and she has to come home to this? Not fair! Dr. Bey, on the other hand has followed Brad’s trail to Laura’s workplace. Just how much fun could an evil genie have when surrounded by porn stars? Well. You’ll just have to read and find out, won’t you? http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...News-Image.jpg The Three Wish War has been a labour of love for Bill Pratt and it shows. The story asks the question of why do genies do what they do and why stop at three wishes? And how far are they willing to go to maintain the status quo? This time around, the genie is bound by the new rules, and he hates them. Worse, his attention is divided by a rebellion turned bloody back in his homeland. He can’t do his job with a paltry three wishes, but a bloodbath to win back the right to perform his job as he sees fit is not what he had in mind. His clients this time around are three roommates: the quiet one, Karen, wants to be an actress. The pretty one, Melanie, enjoys a life of easy leisure, but always wants more. And Natalie just wishes her two friends could get along. Literally. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Boobpire Resurrection #5
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Jenny, the policewoman, opens her eyes to see the zombies being slayed effortlessly by a mysterious woman. The woman soon introduces herself as Hesing, the boobpire slayer. Hesing decides to take her leave as Jenny is still trying to make sense the crazy events that just transpired. Jenny stops Hesing, she begs her to help her avenge her fallen squad. Hesing, seeing resolve in Jenny’s eyes, agrees to help her. Meanwhile back in April’s lair, the two boobpires finish a night of passion. April realizes that she is much weaker than she thought, and needs to feed as soon as possible. April ushers Olivia to help her weak body up. Olivia refuses her creator. April, now betrayed, is left to starve as Olivia goes to feast the contestants of a nearby fashion event…. http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...ion-V_News.jpg Boobpire returns after a long hiatus. The Boobpire story was originally going to be a one-shot story, but reader demand turned Boobpire into a full fledged series. The story also includes sexual situations based vampire erotica. Vampires in popular culture are seen as sexy monsters, as opposed to something like Frankenstein’s monster. Bo Saget thought that breast expansion will be a perfect twist to throw into the vampire formula we have all come to know. Boobpires have similar qualities to vampires, but the have some differences besides the giant breasts. Boobpire’s strengths and weaknesses will be explored further a the story progresses amongst the erotic vampire chaos. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
Grow World
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As this year’s offering for Free Comic Book Day, Grow World draws on the delights of Breast Expansion, Giantess growth, and Bimbofication, as well as limited muscle growth, penis expansion and male shrinking– a little taste of all that the different clubs have to offer. Playing off of similar concepts married couple Jamie and Tim, and rugged adventurer Hector have made their way to Grow World, a medieval themed playground for the wealthy where your desires are your only limitations. Each party is given a remote that can control the physical aspects of any of the Hosts within the park, as well as the guests themselves. Fun and chaos unfolds. http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...orld_News1.jpg Please enjoy this year’s Free Comic Book Day offering, a script by the exciting new author Bacchus. The comic literally has something for everyone: a lot of BE, BIM, mini-GTS, but also some FMG, PE, and SM. The comic dabbles with dominance and power play, asking how much one can truly program or control desire. The story also hints at an expanding, possibly cross-club world, ripe for the taking. FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
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Please tell me you're not charging for a free comic...?
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Free on Free comic day. After that paying for it would make a certain amount of cents.
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Only it's not ever been free, they put up two pages with the rest behind a paywall.
It'd be like comic shoppes saying "yeah, we have some free one-shots and cliffhanger first eds, but there's a $5 cover at the door" which misses the entire point: putting some skin in the game to draw more readers, and with them, increase revenue. And, yes, I realise it's a risky proposition. If Frank Miller can do it, so can you. |
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There was a coupon code listed in the e-mail newsletter, FREECBDAY2017, but I couldn't figure out how to use it.
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I got it to work, but didn't get a chance to read it before it timed out.
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IOW, you had to be a paying subscriber.
To get a code. To unlock a "free" comic book. Fucking SERIOUSLY? |
Stream Famous
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Nikki, a skilled gamer, has been streaming for months and could never get viewers to be attracted to her stream. She vents to her loyal fan Kimmie about her skill not being enough and wishes to have curves and boobs like all the super popular female streamers have and constantly flaunt on stream. A random user in chat appears and offers Nikki to grow on stream. Nikki dismisses this as fake as the user insists he is serious. With a bit of skepticism and curiosity, Nikki accepts the user’s offer. Shortly afterward, her growing lips messes up her speech. Her nails grow and change color along with her hair. Then she finally gets the curves she wished for and the rapidly increasing viewers gets quite the show! Her loyal fan, however, gets extremely jealous of her friend’s newfound fame attempting to figure out how she got herself to grow. http://cdn.botcomics.com.s3.amazonaw...News-Image.jpg Stream famous is the newest one-shot comic by SupremeD. It takes the current day issue of girl streamers and “other” streamers who do nothing but flaunt their curves on stream and turns it into such a great plot! The look and transition of the artwork feels just like those on the real streaming sites, so it feels like this can happen in real life! I don’t know what really causes the transformation, but it’s a good one! Even though it is featured on bimbo club and features a bimbofication sequence, we get quite a bit of breast expansion too! The lactation made it even better! The transformation starts off a little slowly, only focusing on non sexy parts like her hair, hands and feet, but when it does start, oh boy it takes off! The way she can’t contain herself and essentially puts on a cam show for her stream is just so hot! I hope Kimmie gets to grow too! FREE preview of the comic here [no registration required] READ UNLIMITED for 5 days [registration required] |
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I suppose my opinion about how you handled FREE Comic Day doesn't matter, as I'm not a paying subscriber. I'm not looking for a handout here, I'm looking for you to abide by the terms of a promotion of which you ostensibly wanted to take advantage. You showed no indication of doing so, so I see no reason to trust that you won't make up terms unfavourable to me - as a generic, potential subscriber - once you have my money.
I'm starting to see Lorekeep's point, as this - at least from an optics standpoint - wasn't entirely on the level. Do you understand the world of shit that must've occurred for me to agree with Lorekeep on anything more substantial than the time of day? Maybe just don't do Free Comic Book Day in the future, if you're going to set up roadblocks that require people to pay for a "free" comic. Nobody will ever fault you for that. |
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