Sari's Tale: Gold Digger story commission
 

So basically, I was commissioned to write a story set in the Gold Digger universe, which is comic series written by a guy called Fred Perry. I hadn't had any knowledge of it before writing this other than vaguely knowing of it, but it was fun to write anyway.

Anyway, it's set during whatever event in the universe caused people to basically turn into mostly-human anthros, and he wanted basically an origin story for a character of his. It involves tf and some muscle and height growth on an amazon scale.

I was hoping to see what you guys think of it, and also to get some criticism on it, since it's the longest transformation-related story I've written at over five thousand words.

Linking it due to its length, and I'm not sure what the rules are on posting stories in raw text here.