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It sounds interesting. Personally I`d love to read the story esecially with your artwork in it.
Only suggestion, that new characters should be introduced as the story progresses, both good and evil, young to old(no elderly people if possible)
The only question I can think of asking is that whether you could have Age regression, Age progression, Giantess, and Shrinking woman elements.
In the age regression, the other characters could blush and say how cute the regressed person is, pinch their cheek and so. Process must have baggy clothing
Age progression, should happen to the youngest chracter. other characters say how beautiful or handsome the progressed person is. some hopefully envious of the progressed new body.
Giantess, while clothes are being torn, must find a way to clothe themselves before the process stops.
Shrinking woman, You are very good at this. blushing while shrinking, baggy chlothing. Trips on her socks. shows how clothes dont fit body such as breasts too small for bra, or skirt having a lot of empty space and nds up falling down.
I dont mind if you have both guys and girls go throgh these four processes. That makes the story more interesting.
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