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Unread 09-18-2007   #4
Ninja In The Night
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I assure you it's meant as necklace, describing a small crystal bound by a chain. This writer is very good at making the stories, but has a horrible tendency for run ons, spelling errors, & grammar errors. I've had to delete a lot of extra ands. One sentence had 4 in it.

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