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Unread 03-23-2008   #20
theshoelace
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Re: Midna BE Story

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Originally Posted by Huzzus View Post
DMN!!!! w00t ^^

You have gaven I, Huzzus, the power to post. While the story and idea itself is rather nice, the writing skills need a "little" improvement. I, Huzzus, am not hating it and it's a very nice story and you actually are bold enough to skip through the dungeon part which is welcomed XD. 4 out of 5
Okay . Thank you for your comment. Maybe you could give me some advice on how to improve the writing skills?

I did write a small bit more, but I may change it if you guys dislike it. After this piece I planned to skip to Midna's true form- provided you want it.

'' As soon as Link and Midna left the Twilight Realm, Midna warped Link to the Hyrule Castle Town. Link was about to enter, when Midna noticed another disbalance. She put her hands on her buttocks. Was she going crazy, or were they becoming bigger as well? This curse was causing her an awful lot of trouble... she decided not to speak of this with Link as well, she had already disturbed him with her problems numerous times.

Link hasted towards the Castle, and Midna then used the Fused Shadows to destroy the barrier on Hyrule Castle. The entered a huge castle, and the search for keys and the like began again. Midna had decided not to hide in Link?s shadow any more. She couldn?t help but feel dreadful, because she felt how her breasts slowly, but unstoppably grew- and apparently, it seemed to affect her buttocks a bit too. But this seemed insignificant in comparison.

Link had just entered the castle itself after obtaining the key, when Midna asked Link for a moment?s pause. She weighed her breasts on her hands again. They were definately somewhat heavier then they had been in the Palace of Twilight. She put her hands on her buttocks. They did stick out a bit more then they had done, and were a bit wider too. She sighed deeply, wondering if this would become a lot worse.

Link gave her a worried look. He understood that she had to endure a lot, and he forced himself to make as much haste as he could. When he had gotten his hands on the boss key, he had to take a short break. Midna understood, and she was grateful for his haste, but she couldn?t help constantly checking the size of her breasts. After a minute, Link ran off again. He hardly had time to be scared of the ghosts, and simply ran on.

It didn?t even take that much time before he actually reached the huge boss door. He unlocked it and walked in. Ganondorf welcomed them, and walked towards them. ?? You people have l...??, he started, and then suddenly stopped in awe as he took a good look at Midna. ?? I see Zant didn?t do exactly what I told him to do.??, he said. Though she had been stared at numerous times now, Midna turned a bit red again.

?? He used an old spell, and something went wrong. Now, tell me, how do I lift this curse?!??, Midna said. Ganondorf laughed. ?? I have no idea, but you can?t lift it by destroying me, if that?s what you intended.?? Midna was now completely confused. Ganon continued his undoubtedly practised speech, until he came to the point where he posessed Zelda and Link had to defeat him.

This, which probably doesn?t surprise anyone, was achieved rather easily, and Midna, using the Fused Shadows banished Ganondorf from Zelda?s body. Zelda was saved but she wasn?t so surprised at Midna?s change, as their hearts had been like one. But Ganon was not defeated yet and Midna transformed once more to destroy him, after teleporting the unwilling Link and Zelda away.

Link and Zelda witnessed the destruction of Hyrule Castle and saw how Ganondorf had apparently killed Midna; he held her Fused Shadow in his hand and broke it. Another epic battle followed involving light arrows, a horse and a sword. But eventually, the evil Ganondorf was destroyed, and Link saw a figure appear in the distance which he identified as Midna, and ran towards her...''
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