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Originally Posted by Grim
i think it might be better u you went thru what u have written and kinda, go over the stuff that leaves those who have not played this particular game completly in the dark.
maybe after you continue, i wanna see where this goes
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Originally Posted by SoylentOrange
Could definitely use a rewrite, yes. Story's fine, just clean it up and pad out the rushed areas.
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Hm. I rushed through temples and such on purpose, because it mostly does not handle the difference between this story and what happens in his games.
I'm rather busy, but I will rewrite those parts at a certain point.
Maybe anyone could give me some more advice on how, though?