05-18-2008
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Process Fan
Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 31
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Re: First Story-Some R&R&R
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Originally Posted by TB Tabby
Okay...on a technical standpoint, it's rushed at points, and you really need to stop calling her "the shrinking mother" all the time. We're not going to forget that she's a mother and she's shrinking.
As for the plot: I've seen it a million times. Woman is shrunk, imprisoned, humiliated, dominated, and subjugated, and succumbs to Stockholm Syndrome. Aside from being done to death, it's really depressing to see because it's an innocent woman being stripped of her life, and infuriating that I'm expected to enjoy it just because it's SW. I know, I know, it's just a story...but just because it's fiction doesn't make it any less unpleasant to watch. If I wanted to see women getting treated like crap nonstop, I'd read The Boys.
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I agree with TB Tabby, you still have some things to work out...
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