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Originally Posted by CNash
Ah, I didn't see the line before the story started. You might want to make it clearer in the story itself, though.
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Well, Kit is smaller and more petite than Cheetara, and i'm saving most of the "voluptuous descriptions" for her, as she takes on a greater role later on. Kit is also kind of a ditz, which I think is part of her charm here. She becomes more of a sly minx later on.
Maybe I should have gone with Velma as a subject instead, even though the story wouldn't have been as interesting, and I don't know the characters as well.
If there's still any confusion, I could just remove the story and use different characters.