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TF-Viewer · 05-19-2008

You don't have to remove the story. It's fine. You already pointed out that it takes place years later so they're all older. If people still don't get it, you could add another line where the ritual is first being brought up saying that she's now "of age" so she can undergo it. Or say that now that she's 18 (so there's no confusion) she can take part in it.

05-19-2008	#7
TF-Viewer Slave to the Process Forum Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 12,781	Re: Story: Kit's Change You don't have to remove the story. It's fine. You already pointed out that it takes place years later so they're all older. If people still don't get it, you could add another line where the ritual is first being brought up saying that she's now "of age" so she can undergo it. Or say that now that she's 18 (so there's no confusion) she can take part in it.