mrcellophane

Very interesting. I never knew tentacles could be so... useful.

I really enjoy reading this wonderfully written story. Description and plot development are really well played.

I know you have a long list of victims to transform, but would you mind considering this one?

Name: Daniel, "Dan" for short
age:16 gender:male

general appearance: Medium build, thick hands, 5' 7" tall, 165 lbs., dyed-blue short spiky hair, sapphire blue eyes, light skin tone. usually wears a dirty old and worn blue jeans with a ripped up dirty white shirt.

vague personality: Dan is self conscious about his appearance. He tries very hard to look appropriately in public. which is very hard when he lost his home. behind his piercing eyes is a glint of remorse and sorrow. but feeling bad about it now won't bring food to his stomach. he developed a sharp wit and fast reflexes while he was on the streets. he holds a health respect for life.

short history: Dan's parents had divorced 11 years later after he was born. He was left with his abusive father while his mother went over seas. after 3 years of taking beatings from his father, Daniel, in a fit of rage, killed his father and ran away in his adrenaline. while on the streets begging for food, a small gang welcomed him into their ranks. he is the youngest of all the gang members. while still new to the life of thugs, he still holds to the morals he learned for himself about life.

moment of tf: during on of the gangs muggings. He and 2-3 others find and corner Mary in an alley way. During the confrontation between Mary and the thugs. Daniel senses danger and tries to convince the others to let Mary go. seeing this as a sign of weakness the thugs knock him unconscious (at least they think they do). The Body defends Mary from the 'predators'/thugs and changes Daniel's 'friends' into The Flesh. Dan lies deathly still hoping that 'the monster' (Mary) will also think he's unconscious and leave before he gets the same fate as his comrades. Mary debates with The Body to change the boy into a predator for them instead of eating him. The Body sourly agrees. thinking ahead, Mary thinks of a body to sneak him from the alley way to her apartment.

TF into: humanoid rapter with a prehensile tail. four scaly toned arms with three talon like fingers. black spines from the top of his head to the tip of his tail. light and agile with the ability to turn 'invisible' (think uber chameleon) The coloration of the scales is a swirl of blue and green. with the same piercing blue eyes.


that was just off the top of my head. if you'd like more description in the personality or history just say so.