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Originally Posted by Forze
I only speak for myself when I ask you to keep the TF to a minimum. However, in this case, it is logical, and if you want to do it, this story should be what you want, not other people.
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Certainly, but it's fun to write a story together with your readers. I really like transformations- but I won't go far with them. I can't think of any TF right now anyway, so...
Cyero: 'K. The bell will just translate to BE, because the bell, unlike Chateau Romani, does not have incredibly strong magical properties.
OK, here's the Anju piece. Unlike with Cremia, I went for really calm and slow-paced here:
'' Unlike Cremia, Anju had a good night?s sleep. After Clock Town had been saved, the Stock Pot Inn became more and more popular, and so they had hired another girl to work in the morning. It was almost twelve ?o clock when she woke up, quite refreshed. She stretched and yawned. Whistling, she changed from her nightgown to her regular clothes; a red shirt and blue dress. Putting on the shirt, she realised it fit a bit tighter than usual. This surprised her, as she was and had always been a slim girl.
?? I haven?t changed any eating habits...??, she said to herself. She shrugged her shoulders and ignored the matter. She found a note from Kafei, saying he would be visiting his mother the Mayor?s Wife. Anju understood- after all, because of the Skull Kid?s curse they?d been seperated for quite some time. She went out of her room to take over the duty of welcoming guests. She walked the short distance from her room to the counter. ?? Good morning!??, she said to her friend. ?? I?ll take things over from you now.??, she cheerfully added.
Her friend nodded, smiled, and walked off. Anju stood there, constantly smiling, and not just for her job- there was no reason not to smile. She and Kafei were married, her job at the Inn was going great and the world had been saved by the boy in green. Suddenly, a man in armour came in. Anju knew he already had a room, but she couldn?t recall his name. ?? Good afternoon, Mr...??, she said. ?? Shiro.??, he said. ?? Ah... sorry, I?m such an airhead.??, said Anju. ?? That?s fine.??, said Shiro, and walked on to the door leading to the hall.
Anju recalled this man had been gone for a long time at one point, and then returned... thanks to the boy in green. The sun shone brightly over Termina, and Anju sighed. It was really warm- and strangely, her shirt seemed to be getting tighter gradually- though it went so slowly she hardly noticed it until she paid attention. She shrugged her shoulders once more, as it was not the time to have one?s head in the clouds. A customer could come in every second. And she had hardly finished this thought, when the door opened.
And there he was: Kafei, her beloved husband. His purplish-blue hair and bright red eyes shone in the sunlight through the open door. They exchanged a kiss. ?? How?s work been up ?til now, Anju???, he asked. ?? Easy.??, she answered. ?? In the past hours, only one person came in, and this particular person already had a room. And, how is your mother???, she asked. ?? She?s quite well, but she?s heard some strange rumours lately.??, Kafei said. She heard it from the leader of the Indigo-Go?s, that Zora Band.
?? What rumours, Kafei???, said Anju, now quite interested. ?? One of their band members was cursed, apparently.??, he said doubtfully. ?? I haven?t heard much more details, but from what I?ve heard the curse was removed- but then lost somewhere. People are being warned for peculiar flashes.??, he said. Anju thought- last night, she thought she?d seen something like a flash. She didn?t want Kafei to worry, so she kept it to herself for that moment. ?? Oh- well, that?s quite odd.??, she said.
?? Well, Anju, I?m going to look into this some more. Have a great day at work!??, he said with a smile. Anju smiled and waved as Kafei walked out and quickly headed for the exit to the Great Bay. ''