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Unread 08-17-2008   #4
Reif
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Re: Untitled Fiction

Thats actually pretty good. The main character atleast is well defined and motivated. So far you have a great start to a "story" style piece of fiction (as opposed to the one-off pieces). You might want to read Bek de Corbin's work (should be linked in the favorite fiction thread) for other excellent examples of "story" style fiction. Looking forward to chapter 3.
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