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Originally Posted by SoylentOrange
It's an okay story given what he had to work with, but the premise was garbage. Some of the worst Mary-Sue-ing I've seen in quite a while, and given the genre that's saying something.
It's like painting the mona lisa using poo- expert execution using terrible materals. X(
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Which story are you referring to? The Yuriko one with the City of Heroes crossing over with a sort of Warhammer/Shadowrun take on the Fallout universe? Or one of the others?
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Originally Posted by fox_drifter
I liked Myshelle's Medicine. It's a shame you're not a fan of weight gain, I would have enjoyed seeing her get quite a bit bigger! I'm not really much for bondage on my part, but there are often so many fetishes in your stories that it's hard to get stuck up on one thing. Good job! Eager to see more femme/herm-centric stories.  |
Thanks! The commissioner and I couldn't picture her going beyond the 600-700 pounds she ended up at and still have her able to perform her duties at the Amorous Satyr.
I don't think I posted it here, but Myshelle shows up in another story:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1768780/
http://www.yiffstar.com/?pid=69034
Cock TF and conjoinment of husband and wife, as well as cock vore and (reversable) cum TF in that one.