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Devilot · 01-31-2009

My comments; I realize this is a very preliminary version, but I just want to point out everything I've noticed:

a) The "Celebrate" as Celes, Bath, and Sacrifice Bad Ends end a bit abruptly -- it would be nice to at least have a brief "after" scene. If you're ever feeling especially ambitious, the Celes "Bad End" would actually be a pretty good spot to hang a plot fork giving you the option to play as a monstergirl instead.

b) You haven't yet flagged the cave or similar areas as "no save."

c) The regular catgirl and Rosa bad ends don't go anywhere -- they don't end in a game over, fork the plot, or anything. You get to wander a bit, then hit a snag and have to quit to the title. A bit more closure would be nice.

d) I might be willing to help out. I've done some writing before, and I've also worked with RPGMaker 2k and 2k3 a bit. Just dabbled, though.

e) A nice cute AR would be nice.

f) Hmmm... running out of things to say at the moment. Guess I'll end here for now.

g) Oh, wait, just remembered something: Someone mentioned an rb9 yahoo group. Does it still exist? If so, does anyone have the address?

01-31-2009	#75
Devilot Lurker Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 14	Re: Monstergirl Quest (monstergirl, TF, seduction, evil conversion) Dev/Suggestion Th My comments; I realize this is a very preliminary version, but I just want to point out everything I've noticed: a) The "Celebrate" as Celes, Bath, and Sacrifice Bad Ends end a bit abruptly -- it would be nice to at least have a brief "after" scene. If you're ever feeling especially ambitious, the Celes "Bad End" would actually be a pretty good spot to hang a plot fork giving you the option to play as a monstergirl instead. b) You haven't yet flagged the cave or similar areas as "no save." c) The regular catgirl and Rosa bad ends don't go anywhere -- they don't end in a game over, fork the plot, or anything. You get to wander a bit, then hit a snag and have to quit to the title. A bit more closure would be nice. d) I might be willing to help out. I've done some writing before, and I've also worked with RPGMaker 2k and 2k3 a bit. Just dabbled, though. e) A nice cute AR would be nice. f) Hmmm... running out of things to say at the moment. Guess I'll end here for now. g) Oh, wait, just remembered something: Someone mentioned an rb9 yahoo group. Does it still exist? If so, does anyone have the address? Last edited by Devilot; 01-31-2009 at 11:25 PM.