[tsokei]

Wussy this is awesome work! I just had to leave a comment and say I love this story! The premise is awesome and I love the characters and the accuracy. Being a big gamer myself I loved the detail you put into it and erotic growth is also a favorite of mine so this is an awesome combo. I felt like the description of the growth was average but still pretty good. I didn't notice any grammar issues big enough to distract me. I think my favorite part was the first few blasts with the Energy Emitter, and the ending was perfect as well, exactly what I was hoping for. Looking forward to your next work!