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jolem · 02-16-2009

All right the Transformation seems fine, but kind of short too, I mean really short. Story's all right too.

Edit: What you need is more detail on the transformation, IF the transformation part of the story is actually your goal/key point in that story.

02-16-2009	#2
jolem Process Disciple Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 1,494	Re: Irony All right the Transformation seems fine, but kind of short too, I mean really short. Story's all right too. Edit: What you need is more detail on the transformation, IF the transformation part of the story is actually your goal/key point in that story.