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Unread 09-13-2009   #718
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Re: Giantess Zone Growth & Info Thread

OH-KAY!!!

This one goes up to 11! This is definitely the best transference clip you've done so far.

PROS:
+Some very good dialogue
+Kimberly's ass busting out of the jeans--nice
+The bit where Darenzia picked up her underwear to use as a wrap
+Neat new sound effect for the shrinking
+The bra falling off of Darenzia

CONS:
-The panties on the shrinking part could still use a little work; that old "it looks like a completely different pair" thing was back (though not as bad as it used to be)

I might also suggest showing the shrinkee's underwear slipping down off of her ass; I think you did this once before (maybe Kailen's shrinking?) and I can't be the only one who'd like to see it again. After all, the growth side of things gets thrown a bone here, so why not the other half?

Also, kudos on the last bit where Darenzia got picked up. While handhelds aren't necessarily my cup of tea, I can recognize that it was done pretty well.
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