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Unread 10-15-2009   #216
qzar9999
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Re: Giantess Zone Shrinking Ladies Thread

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TOTALLY F#$&ING INCREDIBLE.

*TILT* *TILT* *TILT*

"Did that blow your mind? THAT--JUST--HAPPENED!"

I must praise your L33T MAD SKILLZ. I think I'd have to call this the best job you've done so far on a shrinking woman clip. Probably the only way this could've been better in any meaningful way would be if there'd been two girls involved. But then, I always say that...

What I liked: Almost everything. Her running in the too-large shoes and stumbling out of them. Her frantic attempts to hold onto and run with oversized clothing. The part where her jeans fall down and she pulls them back up (twice!) when she first starts running. The FX shots, particularly where she shrank into her shirt, and where it looked like her feet were getting smaller while her jeans fell down over them. The bit where she shrank into her panties was nice too, as well as the next camera cut where she pulls herself out from under them. The vocal pitch shift was a neat new addition. I also enjoyed seeing her *do* something, and in more than one setting, as opposed to standing in a corner. (Not that I didn't like those other ones, mind you...)

Possibly my favorite thing of all was that the shrinking felt more like a drawn-out, continuous process than in the previous videos. That was quite a treat.

Minor criticisms: (1) The sound of her shoes hitting the floor. It's mentally jarring to hear shoes on a hardwood floor when she appears to be running on concrete. (2) A few places where the FX were just a slight bit...I dunno, rough around the edges--but not much. (I'm thinking mainly the part where she shrank into the shirt, even though I did like that part.) And this is all the more impressive considering you did this clip in a totally new way. (3) While I liked the pitch shift, I wonder if it was maybe just a tad too high. Thank God it wasn't chipmunk range, but I just wonder what it would've sounded like just a touch lower. So, for these three very minor nitpicks, deduct 2.5%. Which brings your final score for this effort to 97.5% of perfection.

Now... Make more. I insist.
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