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Unread 08-11-2006   #51
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I had to read the first part several times because I was first confused with Alex mother, if she had once appeared somewhere in a chapter before or just show up in the nigtmare.
But it was quite scary.

I feel sorry for Rick when Alex presumably turns back into a man; after all he tried to make it for Alex as romantic as possible, not to mention the touching moment with the dinner.

I am looking forward how you will continue the story.


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