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Re: A moment forever (TG, AP)
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Originally Posted by Apsm
I'm going to agree with him. No matter how old you make the girl in appearance, she's still a child. Therefore, you're making Yurix into some sick pervert.
If anything, it would've made more sense to make Nikki become Yurix's partner, complete with personality change. That way, Yurix has a partner and Karyn can become his adoptive daughter.
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That's rough, but I see what you mean.
I'm writing a bit of a sequel to this. I'll take all you can give me for it.
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