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Katt · 04-07-2010

It isn't so much the fact that 'no one' is aware of the changings that bothers me... It's the fact that there doesn't seem to be anything else besides crossdressing. I absolutely LOVE mind/identity change, but it just feels odd/misplaced when its just the person dressed as someone else.

As for the story itself, it seems rather confusing... theres way too many characters who just feel well... random. I know thats how most open 'choose your own adventure' stories go, but that doesn't change the fact that its a confusing mess of random people who only have an honest 3 pages of paragraph each before ending abruptly and introducing yet another random character. The Unending BE has Jim.... this story has Tony, Simmons, Sarah, Phil, Bill, Bob, Leslie, Alex, Phil-2 all vying for to be the main star it seems.

And unfortunately, the "it'll be there later, people just need to post it" excuse just doesn't cut it for me and (I believe) the process in general. Not only does it sound kinda lazy, but also premature. My stories will contain BE and TG in them eventually, but I'm not exactly announcing them on here right now because well, they don't have any yet.

04-07-2010	#12
Katt Guardian of the OverKitty Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The worst scumhole in the galaxy, Teddy Bear Junction. Posts: 3,270	Re: Fiction Branches Storyline It isn't so much the fact that 'no one' is aware of the changings that bothers me... It's the fact that there doesn't seem to be anything else besides crossdressing. I absolutely LOVE mind/identity change, but it just feels odd/misplaced when its just the person dressed as someone else. As for the story itself, it seems rather confusing... theres way too many characters who just feel well... random. I know thats how most open 'choose your own adventure' stories go, but that doesn't change the fact that its a confusing mess of random people who only have an honest 3 pages of paragraph each before ending abruptly and introducing yet another random character. The Unending BE has Jim.... this story has Tony, Simmons, Sarah, Phil, Bill, Bob, Leslie, Alex, Phil-2 all vying for to be the main star it seems. And unfortunately, the "it'll be there later, people just need to post it" excuse just doesn't cut it for me and (I believe) the process in general. Not only does it sound kinda lazy, but also premature. My stories will contain BE and TG in them eventually, but I'm not exactly announcing them on here right now because well, they don't have any yet.