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Originally Posted by Beetlebomb
I did attempt to provide some details to Emily, but I like to allow the readers to add their own specific properties to the characters to make them more attractive in their own minds.
Could be a wrong move on my part, but hopefully not everyone feels the same way.
--Beetle
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Well, in my opinion, the types of descriptions you did with Jeri, Katie, and Jennifer was sufficient. I just feel like the very brief physical description provided by the DREAM (not the narrator), doesn't quite do the job.
Obviously I don't expect you to detail everything, but I feel like it would have added more to that particular section.