Re: Rob and the Machine(Slow Growth, Partial SM, Mini-GTS, BE)
Yeah, I like the story, the pacing is nice, however a few reference points for size would be nice. Not saying you have to say "they're 5'10!" or "Their breasts swelled to D cups!" but some kind of reference would be nice, whether it be someone else who's normal size, or comparison to something.
As far as describing growth though, this is quite superb, so two thumbs up on that front!
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