Re: "Sailor Moon: The Bachelorette Party" **NEW COMIC**
Time for a fairly length review.
Art-wise, it looks great. Nice colors, cute clothes (especially for shrunken Rei, who is dressed as probably my favorite SW in anime), and the characters most of the time stay on-model. I notice Usagi's breasts have grown quite a bit since the end of the series. XD
Story-wise, I liked how you work in a way to explain how the girls shrunk. I always did wonder when watching any season but the first if Naru was annoyed that she was more or less replaced as Usagi's best friend by four other girls and her daughter from the future.
However, I thought the shrinking came in a little late, as well as went by fairly quickly. I originally thought all four girls would shrink one at a time, but then Makoto and Minako shrink near simultaneously. I also thought that Minako's bow in her hair would stay on as she shrunk like Makoto's hair accessory, but it didn't. I thought it would've been cute. ^^;
Dialogue-wise, it was a little confusing how you sometimes didn't use honorifics and sometimes did. In the anime, the girls almost always refer to each other with the -chan honorific (except Rei to Usagi). At first I thought you purposely dropped it since the girls are older now, but then it came up again. It didn't affect the story or anything - just wanted to let you know. ^^;
Overall, though, I liked it. The scene where Ami is grabbing on to Rei's nipple was (in my opinion) funny, as well as Ami's comment when she shrinks: "Please be the booze." Love how you worked in delayed shrinking for Rei, too. More than worth the money, at any rate.
One question, though - who are shrunken Ami and Makoto supposed to be dressed as? I got Rei and Minako, but not them..
Last edited by Silver Spoon; 05-29-2010 at 03:54 PM.
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