[Jaran]

Well, I guess I'll offer my 2 cents.

I thought it was great, like most of the people who posted, but I like to see more interaction DURING the process of shrinking.

I don't really think this qualifies as spoilers, but I can censor it if requested. Usagi's shrink focused almost entirely on climbing onto the bed, though the interaction with Amy was good.

I like to see the characters interact more as their sizes change, the scene just before the end with the 3 of them all different sizes was great, more of that would be awesome for my tastes.

It just seemed a little dry, I guess. Shrink across 4 or 5 panels, then gratuitous sex scenes and insertion, etc. (which are awesome, don't get me wrong) I just like to see a little more interaction during the process. If you've purchased "The Two-Foot Difference", that's the kind of thing I'm talking about. That comic is absolutely exceptional for interaction DURING the process.

Anyway, that's my critique, which mostly comes down to preference, I guess. :S