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Originally Posted by CNash
A good beginning for your story. Do watch your tenses; you're flipping back and forth between past and present - "I say" versus "I said". Given that most of your story is present tense, I'd stick with that.
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I noticed I was doing that, and at times decided to keep it one way or the other. It made sense to me at the time, but I think my mind was just spewing at that point. I'll go back and patch it all one way, and probably present tense. I wanted to tell the story as if it were happening now, not being told after the fact.
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Originally Posted by CNash
Are you going to depict the reverse TF? We don't see a lot of F2M TGs and it would be interesting.
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The story has been very organic, and while I have a plan I don't know where it will go and how it will end for sure yet. I started writing with just an idea, expecting to give up like I have done in the past after a page or so. I have about four or five routes that the character could go down.