Quote:
Originally Posted by frice2000
I wouldn't say this is a 'tg story' really. Sure it had a transformation in it but not really a TG story not enough exploration of that. However, it was a very well written little short story. Quite nicely told and very nicely vivid. Great work. I look forward to seeing what else you do in the future. I'll definitely be checking out your DA account.
|
Yeah I know the TG elements in the first section weren't too drawn out, but the series as a whole builds the themes and structures of transformation at much greater length and detail. I'd love to hear what you think of the other sections in it.