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Originally Posted by Eelskin
She couldn?t possibly have cared about Adam the say Dolores had.
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Joshua is really going to have to get used to this whole "resort full of super-tall gorgeous women" thing, because otherwise this entire stay is going to be weirdly uncomfortable for him. And I hope that Sabrina isn't the jealous type, because if he's gonna keep pitching tents around other women when she's nearly twice his size, things are going to get real ugly real fast.
Also: Dolores sounds like a huge bitch. Perhaps this is why Adam ran away from her 10 years ago and into Sabrina's arms. After all, I highly doubt that Sabrina is going to threaten people with cleaning up puke with their tongues.
Powertripping from authority AND vengeful from something that happened over a decade ago? Sounds like a winner to me!
(I get that this is what you were going for in the character, just seemed worth mentioning)
It's a good story, if a tad silly. (If you had a potion that could temporarily enlarge people with seemingly no limit, there's a lot better things to do with it than open a resort hotel.) I'm interested to see exactly what Dolores does to get "even" with Sabrina.