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Originally Posted by blackshirtboy
Pretty good, love the beginning of the transformation on the second page but I feel like it jumps too far ahead for the third page.
Thats just me though, thank you for the content!
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I kinda noticed that too. Started out nice and slow, but then kinda started speeding up. By the end the 2nd TF was a "poof"
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The pacing is abit bizarre.