I'd love to read the original text of the story. While I really liked it, I got the feeling that a quite a bit of the original narrative got lost in the translation to the page-constricted medium of the Giantess Club comic.
There was not a whole lot of character development in the version we got to see, in fact, most of the time I was pretty confused about who was who, their motivations, and exactly what everyone's relationship was to one another. Again, I think this was due to the limitations of the comic.
Anyway, please don't take this as a negative review. I really liked the story and would very much like to see the entire thing as opposed to the abridged version we got from Giantess Club.