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Laughingman · 08-09-2011

Yeah don't feel bad if you don't get too many comments on your stories, lol. I can't read this now but when I have more time I'll go over it. My only suggestion at a glance is that you should space out your paragraphs a bit more. I did this when I first started writing, and a friend showed me how much spacing can help, hehe

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08-09-2011	#6
Laughingman Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 374	Re: Kresh, a Dungeons and Dragons tale (BE and the like to follow) Yeah don't feel bad if you don't get too many comments on your stories, lol. I can't read this now but when I have more time I'll go over it. My only suggestion at a glance is that you should space out your paragraphs a bit more. I did this when I first started writing, and a friend showed me how much spacing can help, hehe .