Re: At the Gym [story]
Interesting to see the first-person perspective used as a female protagonist - especially since your girls have a habit of going out and acquiring whatever phlebotinum they need to make their changes.
I cannot wait to see where you go with this - especially if you draw it out like in your other stories. That's one of your strengths, I feel; your sense of restraint is rare in this community and it's muchly appreciated.
Carry on!
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