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Originally Posted by 2dollars
This is basically a copy and paste from my review on the club. But here you go!
Well the story is getting weird.
First il start with the good. The size comparison and the masturbation scene was nice and that is about it. The rest of it was just odd distractions from the core of the comic.
For one the two bunnies were cute but completely unnecessary. It distracts from the hot gts action going one and is a wasted panel.
Then the old blind lady came and well, I was not turned on anymore. The story needs some work.
I'll end on a good note though. The giantess is indeed cute like the other viewers say.
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Interesting. So you say you'd rather have less story and more growth scenes?
When I write comics like this, I feel compelled to justify what's happening with the backstory and sometimes I suppose that takes over.
I'm planning a few one-shot comics which will feature just growth with little to no story though, keep an eye out for them. I'd love to see what you think of them.