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monkat · 01-14-2012

Great story, but littered with grammatical oversights and errors (? la "Luis's", or Bronie/Bronia's name change, or accidentally saying a clause twice).

A thorough proof-read would do wonders, though it's not like it is terrible right now--just not perfect.

01-14-2012	#6
monkat Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 132	Re: Lots of Growing to Do by praedatorius Great story, but littered with grammatical oversights and errors (? la "Luis's", or Bronie/Bronia's name change, or accidentally saying a clause twice). A thorough proof-read would do wonders, though it's not like it is terrible right now--just not perfect.