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Lurking Guy · 01-18-2012

Two qualms.

One, I think you may want to simplify your designs. Like, a lot. Both because you'll be spending time on those little details you could spend putting out more material and because, well, it just does not look good. If you tone it down it could look okay, but right now the "fertile" one looks even more horrifying than the troll.

Two, you have neither a story nor a "concept" here for us to evaluate. You just have "I want to start my comic with a troll and end it with a hot chick." You'll probably want to get more details than that hammered down before you start asking opinions and trying to make a commitment.

01-18-2012	#2
Lurking Guy Lurking Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 197	Re: Death knight to fertility knight Two qualms. One, I think you may want to simplify your designs. Like, a lot. Both because you'll be spending time on those little details you could spend putting out more material and because, well, it just does not look good. If you tone it down it could look okay, but right now the "fertile" one looks even more horrifying than the troll. Two, you have neither a story nor a "concept" here for us to evaluate. You just have "I want to start my comic with a troll and end it with a hot chick." You'll probably want to get more details than that hammered down before you start asking opinions and trying to make a commitment.