[Laughingman]

I find it pretty interesting as a story. It's simple, lends itself to lots of ideas, and the art is fantastic! I too am a fan of the "not so cluttered" but that's mostly because of reading lots of Manga where there's liquids spraying everywhere and tons of lines and you kind of get lost in it all. I think your art will be fine though, you just might get tired after doing all of that, lol. I wouldn't mind seeing her going around and making women more busty and other things. Neat concept!