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Originally Posted by splinterfox
Now when you say original version are you talking about the first story where she gets transformed on stage? Or is it a remake of the 2nd story that was posted on the docs lab forum daily a year ago?
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Just the original story where she changed on stage. What I posted on doc's forum was what I considered the first draft of Jacqueline's Choice. That said the final story is fairly different from what I wrote initially. A good half of those events in the draft we tossed out. What I replaced it with is completely different. I like the ending much better now.