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Unread 09-06-2012   #1590
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Re: mind control, bimbo transformation

I really enjoyed it. Would have liked the main character to get off scot-free. I think the story could have benefited from not shifting perspectives so suddenly. The bar maid could have also returned after Steffi's transformation, and joined in on the bimboisms, in order to drive the point home to the main character. Maybe I'm just bimbo-greedy.
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