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Unread 09-12-2012   #8
hexen
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Re: sodacat writes things

Sorry for having no idea of what "jumping the shark" means but surely it must be a funny slang. Just finished reading the working story and I have to say I get impressed very easily. As much as I wish I knew about the setting of "17th century pirates" I actually don't so anything an author tells me is actually coherent, but ranting asside I did like the story and the transformation scene although some parts felt a little disjointed as if the time had stopped to wait for the captain to tranform. Also I know some people will bash me for that but I still like the idea of the legs turning into the tail, sue me.
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