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TF-Viewer · 09-12-2012

Well I thought it was an interesting concept. Back story on Marion would be nice, like just how does someone acquire the ability to turn into a shark at will? Also a bit more description couldn't hurt, for instance though she stripped down naked I don't think there was any mention of how her figure looked, breast size, was she curvy, thin etc? The breaking bones during the transformation was something I didn't expect, also it didn't seem particularly painful for that to happen to her as one might expect it would be. Lastly, (and only because it's a shark transformation that dealt with details of changing bone structure) I was somewhat disappointed that no transition from boney skeleton to cartilaginous skeleton took place. I still thought it was good though.

09-12-2012	#11
TF-Viewer Slave to the Process Forum Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 12,781	Re: sodacat writes things Well I thought it was an interesting concept. Back story on Marion would be nice, like just how does someone acquire the ability to turn into a shark at will? Also a bit more description couldn't hurt, for instance though she stripped down naked I don't think there was any mention of how her figure looked, breast size, was she curvy, thin etc? The breaking bones during the transformation was something I didn't expect, also it didn't seem particularly painful for that to happen to her as one might expect it would be. Lastly, (and only because it's a shark transformation that dealt with details of changing bone structure) I was somewhat disappointed that no transition from boney skeleton to cartilaginous skeleton took place. I still thought it was good though.