[sodacat]

Thanks for the feedback both of you. I suppose I should have called this story an introduction, because I do have ideas for a follow up that would explain a bit more about Marion, her world, and set her against an antagonist on equal footing. Looking back on it some parts of the transformation do kind of seem like I was just going down a checklist, so I will try to work more of making it feel less stilted.

Also for the record Marion is both shark and human, which is why she doesn't grow hair while human and has bones while a shark. I also kind of skimped on that because I have no idea what the properties of a shark's cartilage are.