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MrLarpus · 10-01-2012

The story was neat, but I feel that you could have gone into more detail with the tf aspect. it's mostly before/after with a bit in between.

Very well written though. great work =)

10-01-2012	#6
MrLarpus Lurker Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 18	Re: Layers - Short Story The story was neat, but I feel that you could have gone into more detail with the tf aspect. it's mostly before/after with a bit in between. Very well written though. great work =)