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Originally Posted by TF-Viewer
He removed that story himself because he's made a new updated/extended version that he's selling. I'm not sure he'd be happy if you posted the original here, you may want to consider removing that attachment as he is a member of these forums. Just saying. |
After reading the trial and buying the ebook, I decided to compare it with the original version. It should come to no surprise that the updated version is superior to the original in every possible way. It's still pretty short, so I won't go into any details, though the story has left me with A LOT of questions. I'd love to read more about the characters, but considering how this is a short story, I doubt it'll happen. Still, I'm satisfied with what I got. From someone who rarely cares about inanimate TF-themed stories (I'm fairly indifferent about all TF artwork and/or videos), I really enjoyed reading it, and for $2.99, you'll definitely get your money's worth from cover-to-cover (yes, I even enjoyed reading the author's notes at the end).
You do need to install Kindle (originally installed it to download an ebook based on the Lunar: Silver Star Story series; glad to have found another book), but it should be free to install for all devices except for the actual Kindle tablets, for obvious reasons. Of course, if Amazon isn't your thing, you can always buy it at SmashWords in the link below:
http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/301094
Personally, I wish I was made aware of this link instead of the other one. There's a wider variety of formats to choose from, not just Kindle, though it's also included here.
