Well might as well congratulate ya here too. Welcome back!
Oh, and to get away from the DA drama, here's some constructive stuff.
- I can see the complaints about the face, its trailing off in the cheeks a little on her right/our left side, the eyes are asymmetrical and a bit doll-like.
Try coloring in a deeper blue soft spot in the center and giving off more reflection to light, in short, more contrast, more fun like so.
http://gyazo.com/dc1cd7d425b1de4204a936c3b99a5393
- Her chest is a bit high for her tall torso and one boob is bigger than the other, which waist itself I'd shorten or make her hips really flare out and start higher on her body to balance out.
- Her lips could be plumper on top, right now, the heavy inking gives her a small lustful panting look than a cute raspberry like I think you were going with.
EDIT: I would/will redline it but my tablet broke so I'm getting said monoprice tablet myself.
Overall, its a nice return piece and I like your semi-realistic anime attempts, but your anatomy is still a work in progress!
Also for faces, I think you should simplify your shadows a bit. Just doing the hair, sides of the jawline and a little triangle on the unexposed side of the nose is fine.
EDIT 2: Ahh got deleted off DA, same with the commission.