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Originally Posted by Blackbat
11,863 views for this thread, i think people care. I meant to comment last night but I'm busy moving house and forgot. So...
Great story and smart resolve for the finishing and ending!
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Wish you all the happiness in your new home!
Number of views is a weird statistic, I know I look a lots of stuff I don't care about, I land on the forum and check-out the top posts. Most of the time only to realize its the same old thing being bumped...
I've been trying a few different things with this story and I really hoped people would chip in about stuff like Male frontal nudity or ask questions about the characters... The story could have gone on longer If I saw that this character or that one had people interested in more.
An example would be, if a few reader had gone:
"do something sexy with Ana!" then I might have added a scene or two involving her. Or the girls' mother
"make her eat some spice, I want to see if she was a hottie in her younger years..."
But if nobody brings up anything like that then, even if it doesn't mean they don't care about the story, I can't tell if I succeeded in making this or that character or situation stand out.
Someone once told me he thought the Jen character from Funky Spice was a failure because I made her look too dumb.(even for a blonde) I realized that it was probably time for me to bring out those personality traits that I was keeping for later. Turns out she's not THAT stupid, she's just young excessive and a little naive.
THAT'S THE POWER OF FEEDBACK
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Originally Posted by vincent_richter
Don't mistake my lack of commentary for a lack of appreciation.
I merely have nothing to say - in the form of complements - that hasn't already been said a million times.  |
Thanks. can you provide a million links? LOL
Chorcen, Snafu. thanks to you both as well.
My next story before I go Back to Funky Spice will cater more to the "amazons" crowd than "theProcess" mainly because there will be very little process and more F vs M and F vs F confrontations and competitions and such... I might not even post it here or on giantesscity.com because it would almost be off-topic. So if you want to read more of what's going on in the comic universe I created and keep expanding you might want to check out amaz0ns.com and amazonlove.org