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07-21-2013

Looks like I will be first to write, who actually seen full thing.

PDF format is not a problem, you can always convert it to JPEGs, takes 2 minutes.

It's a big story - 190 pictures, the comics features Story telling more than growth of any kind just as Snootling says above, there isn't growth as such, except some aging up of the new generation. There are 3 male main characters and 9 female characters from the start, later on they get daughters and 1 son, which will star in follow up story. I was a bit sad when 2 of main characters died, although 1 of them was a prick and probably deserved it.

With regards how story is put together, all pictures are top notch quality, in some of the frames, Snootling tried to tell the story and it feels a little big overloaded with text, I actually admit, that I was lost where dialog starts and what is follow up as speech bubbles were position in different places. Perhaps in the future you can add little numbers or work on positioning a little better i.e first bubble starts from character, next phrase starts from the first speech bubble. It will be easier to follow up conversation in the frame if you must fit a lot of dialog in.

07-21-2013	#10
chorcen Guest Posts: n/a	Re: New story: Colonial cousins. (Growing Amazons, AP) Looks like I will be first to write, who actually seen full thing. PDF format is not a problem, you can always convert it to JPEGs, takes 2 minutes. It's a big story - 190 pictures, the comics features Story telling more than growth of any kind just as Snootling says above, there isn't growth as such, except some aging up of the new generation. There are 3 male main characters and 9 female characters from the start, later on they get daughters and 1 son, which will star in follow up story. I was a bit sad when 2 of main characters died, although 1 of them was a prick and probably deserved it. With regards how story is put together, all pictures are top notch quality, in some of the frames, Snootling tried to tell the story and it feels a little big overloaded with text, I actually admit, that I was lost where dialog starts and what is follow up as speech bubbles were position in different places. Perhaps in the future you can add little numbers or work on positioning a little better i.e first bubble starts from character, next phrase starts from the first speech bubble. It will be easier to follow up conversation in the frame if you must fit a lot of dialog in.