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Unread 07-26-2013   #12
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Re: New story: Colonial cousins. (Growing Amazons, AP)

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Originally Posted by chorcen View Post
With regards how story is put together, all pictures are top notch quality, in some of the frames, Snootling tried to tell the story and it feels a little big overloaded with text, I actually admit, that I was lost where dialog starts and what is follow up as speech bubbles were position in different places. Perhaps in the future you can add little numbers or work on positioning a little better i.e first bubble starts from character, next phrase starts from the first speech bubble. It will be easier to follow up conversation in the frame if you must fit a lot of dialog in.
Ahahahaha that's my boy Snotling alright :P I will again suggest you include a textless version for us wankers

I didn't see the previews in the store, going to look now!
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