Thank you! My girlfriend kind of pointed out that I hadn't really done a sweet story before so I took that and used a little flash of an idea I had (a boyfriend walking in on his girlfriend transforming in the bathroom) and fleshed it out into this story. I also tried to work on my descriptions and characterizations - notably at the beginning of the story so hopefully that went well. And then just the pure sensual seduction like at the door frame.
The original I posted at the beginning (if you read it first) had a much harsher typical style for me for the werewolves - rough violent sex. And then, again, my GF read it and said, hey, ummm, sweet, remember? I tend to forget
But it absolutely made sense for the characters and what I was doing so I revised it and turned it into more of a gentle scene since it fit the characters. With a bit of a struggle internally as well.
I also played with the transformations - a bit different than what I normally do, especially with the partial transformations.