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CNash · 08-28-2013

Yes, comparing the two versions, I think I like the "sweet" style a lot more. The emphasis on how soft her fur is, in particular.

BTW, I got the impression from some of the dialogue that Kelly had actually transformed prior to this, and this was her second transformation? Now, I know that the "first TF" story is a bit overdone, but you know people love reading it anyway

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CNash What would you rather be? Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 714	Re: The Coin [Werewolf TF Story] Yes, comparing the two versions, I think I like the "sweet" style a lot more. The emphasis on how soft her fur is, in particular. BTW, I got the impression from some of the dialogue that Kelly had actually transformed prior to this, and this was her second transformation? Now, I know that the "first TF" story is a bit overdone, but you know people love reading it anyway __________________ "And the Lord said, 'Come forth and receive eternal life.' But John came fifth and won a toaster." Avatar by Geckz Last edited by CNash; 08-28-2013 at 03:26 AM.