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Unread 09-07-2013   #45
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Re: Layers (Incomplete)

Damn. Not just the sex... and the sex, and the other sex... did I mention the sex? But the "answers"... that were not what our protagonist wanted to hear. The wizard, Thomas, is quite possibly one of your creepiest, scariest creations, especially when you mention his voice not matching his mouth movements. I also caught the foreshadowing - she feels like she's "still male but wrapped in a female body", and then the wizard tells her that's exactly what she is. "I'll cut Hannah off of you"... *shudder*

As always, totally worth the wait. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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